Lost In The City
not bad keep it up be sure you don't drown in sea of cliche's and you'll be just fine.
the only thing that was a bit off was the singing, it was very weak most of the time you'll have rappers do the vocals like that, but I find it a bit off so I recommend trying to find someone who can sing and just bring them on for parts where you need nice vocals, might be hard to find someone with the right sound but it will be worth it.
good luck